To get the ball rolling on my first blog post, I am going to write my reaction over the poet Thomas Hardy. I found him to be a very pessimistic poet while reading his works. I have chosen the poem "Neutral Tones" to discuss in today's blog post.
"Neutral Tones" is a poem about a relationship that does not last. Hardy hints or suggests that he should have seen the doomed relationship coming. In the first stanza, fourth line, Hardy mentions "they had fallen from an ash, and were gray." Hardy's mention of a dark and gloomy color is a foreshadowing of what is to come in the poem. The first thing I noticed and related to in this poem was the use of color. It jumped out at me, possibly because the poem's first stanza ends with the use of the color gray and in the fourth stanza once again ending with the description of the color gray.
In the first stanza, first line; Hardy describes the setting of this poem on a winter day at the pond. When I picture winter I visualize bare trees, grass less grounds, overcast skies that are gray and not clear blue. I feel the cold and a sense of loneliness. During winter it is as if all things go away and all that is left is emptiness. I believe the first stanza emphasizes on setting. I do not believe Hardy describes the setting to let the reader know where the event or this poem is taking place, but to give the reader a sense of what is to come in the next three stanza's. I felt the setting of a winter day and throughout the poem I grasped an even stronger sense of death and emptiness.
The second stanza is almost reminiscent of their past love. Hardy describes her wandering eyes that gaze upon him. Hardy also mentions being lost by their love. He seems to be remembering a pleasant time when nothing mattered except each other's company.
I viewed the third stanza as his past memories, but past memories that could have possibly been a hint into what the future would hold for these two lovers. Lines one and two in stanza three, "The smile on your mouth was the deadest thing, Alive enough to have the strength to die." These two lines alone represent the life and death of love in a relationship. I also believe that they tie back into that sense of loneliness, death and emptiness that a winter day and the color of gray can portray. Lines three and four in stanza three "And a grin of bitterness swept thereby," "Like an ominous bird a-wing..." gave me a feeling that this love was not lasting. The words "swept" and "ominous" were key indicators that their love was not going to last, and that these feelings would soon end. The use of the simile "Like an ominous bird a-wing..." is a very powerful line for me. Ominous meaning something bad or unpleasant that is going to happen, informs the reader what is next, but the use of relating it to a "bird a-wing," described the death of their love. When I think of a bird or wings I envision leaving, flying away, nothing permanent.
The fourth and last stanza, brings the whole poem together. It is the explanation to what Hardy is truly writing about. It ties back in the setting, which is used this time for the use of his feelings. We know after this stanza that the love did not last and he finds love to be empty and untrue.